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ShurPetra69 Mason Application

Posted: January 21st, 2013, 6:36 pm
by ShurPetra69
Hi, some users tell me about post an application to get mason rank on this server by the little town i'm building in the CMP server. Well, here is it. This is "ShurTown", if you want to visit it, only type /warp shurtown into the server and enjoy it.

Well, the city has:

-Hospital: With two ambulances, a helicopter, bar, office zone, emergencies room, operating rooms, icus and 69 rooms, it has parking too.
-Swimming Pools: with one adult swimming pool and another to kids playing, bar services and two locker rooms for men and womans, and toilets.
-Hotel: The hotel has garden, big reception, a restaurant, employers zone, toilets, 6 simple rooms and 2 suites, and a little viewpoint too.
-Shopping Mall: The shopping mal has 4 shops (weapons, tools, clothes and food), on second floor have bar and big walk zone, under the floor have the toilets and tickets shop to acces to subway station under shopping mall.
-The disco: simply have big dance zone, light effects, toilets, vip zone, and dj cabin.
-Park: The park has many trees, a lot of benchs and a big water lake in the center of it. Its a large rest zone.
-The residential zone: has two houses at moment with all necesary (rooms, toilets, kitchen, living room and bedroom), and one of them have big home theatre in the basement.
-Parking: in fron of hotel, "ShurTown" has free parking.

Well, i already explain it, its time to see the photos. You can see all photos on this link. Thanks for the time to see it and wecome everybody to my little town.

Here's the album: http://imgur.com/a/zSWRJ

But i advise you, is better if you join and visit it!

Re: ShurPetra69 Mason Application

Posted: January 21st, 2013, 9:03 pm
by Jjb14
I like your build!

Here are some things-

-I love your attention to detail and your interiors are phenomenal!

-Could you try making some builds not so... cubish? Try to incorporate some epic designs and cool colors. It seems almost all of your buildings are cubish with out much detail on walls.

-Vary your designs! Change things up, even on walls!

-Lastly, you may not want to, but I find making builds on normal worlds to be more impressive due to varying terrains. Some may not, but I do. You should try it!

I don't think you are quite mason quality yet, but with a little practice and improvement you could easily be. Keep trying! :pig:

Re: ShurPetra69 Mason Application

Posted: January 21st, 2013, 9:26 pm
by ShurPetra69
Thank you for reply! I appreciate your advises. I'll try to make better designs. Thank you very much.

I would like any user who read this thread write a reply with their advises, all of them will be appreciated. Thanks.