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 Post subject: Architect Application - Xb0x4dm
PostPosted: March 28th, 2013, 7:10 pm 
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Well... I never though I'd see my self doing this but yeah. Here I am to try my luck for a next rank.
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated and I'd love any ideas on how to improve my work.

Well... First off... I start with this Boeing-747 airplane. It isn't a great build but it's alright to start this off:
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Next up... I have my Brittanic ship which was designed by White Star Line and was a floating hospital which was sunken by a Mine. Some of yous may remember it from the very old mason application of mine. This version is 1000x better and 3times the size:
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This is a cruise I made on the classic server, don't judge this one, jsut wanted to put it on the applications:
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Next up is a little cathedral I made! The two main towers are from Hogwarts. Then I simply added walls and added detail using the several types of sandstone block. E.G Sandstone stairs, sandstone halfblocks...:
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And now we have a random building I made in Classic one day when I was bored don't mind if you don't include this, it's pretty basic I understand that:
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Time for another ship. This time it's The Queen Mary 2. build this back in classic in my world 'ShipBuilding' Also be sure to check out 'ShipBuilding2' made by me and Evansurya555:
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Next up we have one of my best projects which I've had nice feedback of the players at fCraft. You's may have seen it before but it's my London tower Bridge:
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Finally (for this update) we have my final ship which is nearing completion! It's Titanic. Completely rebuilt from scratch! It still has quite alot of detail to be added. It even has the Grand staircase from the movie! IT's 3 times the size of the original one I made in Survival Single Player (Can be found on the forums) I leave you... Titanic!:
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Hope you guys like them, feedback would be great. thanks for taking time to read this.
Spoiler: there is a new build that will be ready soon and will be updated here!

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 Post subject: Re: Architect Application - Xb0x4dm
PostPosted: March 28th, 2013, 9:11 pm 
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Nice builds.

Here's how I feel-

I love your ships. I believe those to be arch. quality, however, I do not think your buildings are of arch. quality. Do I think you should be promoted to architect? No. Do I think you are well on your way? Absolutely. Your CMP creations are great, and are getting even better by the day. I don't quite think that you are building on an architect quality quite yet, but with a little more time, practice, and builds you could have it.

On a note for improvement, I would suggest varying your builds more. I love your ships, but building outside of the box would be awesome, which is why your bridge and cathedral are cool! Also, I would suggest varying your other builds away from sandstone and sand. Those builds are awesome, but it would be so cool to see some other themes as well! If you stick with building something long enough, and improving it, you can eventually end up with something awesome. So try to find ways to improve your building style. Build it to look good! (Shitty way of describing what I'm thinking)

Also, one last suggestion, but it seems like quite a few of your builds you had help with including your bridge, cathedral (copied from Hogwarts?), ship building with Evan, help with the frames... I don't know how much help you received with these so I will not comment too much on that matter, but if I recall correctly, for a build to be considered in an application it must be built by the applicant only. If you could clarify maybe?

Overall, nice application, I certainly am looking forward to seeing what you bring build in the future.

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 Post subject: Re: Architect Application - Xb0x4dm
PostPosted: March 28th, 2013, 9:21 pm 
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Evan did not help with the queen mary. That was made alone. He helped with the second map which was not put in here. Also, I didn't get help with the bridge? Freewill designed a new tower, but I never used it, just wunds give me a tip of using blackwool instead of ice for windows, which makes it stand out more. Also what frames do you mean?

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PostPosted: March 28th, 2013, 9:33 pm 
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Xb0x4d4m wrote:
Also, I didn't get help with the bridge


http://forum.fcraft.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=3820

Sorry, the PS on this was a joke or so then. Not sure.

Xb0x4d4m wrote:
Also what frames do you mean?


I meant the frames of some of the ships you've made, but you mentioned in game that was with a hull of a ship in your server, so my bad.

Xb0x4d4m wrote:
Evan did not help with the queen mary.


Re-read. My mistake. ^^

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PostPosted: March 28th, 2013, 9:57 pm 
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Jjb14 wrote:
Xb0x4d4m wrote:
Also, I didn't get help with the bridge


http://forum.fcraft.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=3820

Sorry, the PS on this was a joke or so then. Not sure.

Xb0x4d4m wrote:
Also what frames do you mean?


I meant the frames of some of the ships you've made, but you mentioned in game that was with a hull of a ship in your server, so my bad.

Xb0x4d4m wrote:
Evan did not help with the queen mary.


Re-read. My mistake. ^^


It's cool! :)

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 Post subject: Re: Architect Application - Xb0x4dm
PostPosted: March 28th, 2013, 10:56 pm 
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To sound like a total dick; I do not like the airplane at all. Looks small, not detailed, and finished quickly. Not to mention only uses 3 block types. But I suppose it could be one of those builds where it only looks good in-game.

But other than that your other stuff on CMP looks awesome.

Up-vote!

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 Post subject: Re: Architect Application - Xb0x4dm
PostPosted: April 1st, 2013, 11:57 am 
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Xb0x4d4m wrote:
It's Titanic.


Make a statue of Leonardo DiCaprio :wink:

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 Post subject: Re: Architect Application - Xb0x4dm
PostPosted: April 4th, 2013, 9:02 am 
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Astraues wrote:
Xb0x4d4m wrote:
It's Titanic.


Make a statue of Leonardo DiCaprio :wink:


Lol...

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PostPosted: April 12th, 2013, 2:01 pm 

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Nice builds ! :D


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 Post subject: Re: Architect Application - Xb0x4dm
PostPosted: April 18th, 2013, 5:11 pm 
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look at this,
4d4m goes for arch ;3

Titanic looks awesome, no doubt about that, but I
agree with pothus about that planes :3

But anyway, good luck with your application :)


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