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Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: August 4th, 2013, 11:50 pm
by FierceReacter
I would like to be a mason because I feel like I am good at building and what the heck, it'll be fun. I also got challenged by David so here it is.

Build 1:My first build is a star figured shape and is located on u_owdja
http://imgur.com/a/4iaJC

Build 2:My Second build is one of my beginning builds I've made with a pool, steam room, and relaxation place on the roof. It's located in vetcanyon2 (I also had a way bigger version of this but the world got lost, along with about 5 other builds.
http://imgur.com/a/NOifA

Build 3:This next build is a build I did in my freetime. Its a badge looking thing. Located on vetcanyon2
http://imgur.com/a/QTPMm

Build 4:My next build is a hotel I just gave up on. Located on vetcanyon2
http://imgur.com/a/kbrZR

Build 5:This next one is a shitty build, but i like to share it. Located on vetcanyon2
http://imgur.com/a/tGhnF

Build 6:Next one is a water build I made with some of my favorite mc blocks. Located on vetcanyon2
http://imgur.com/a/Ev84d

Build 7:Next one is a tower type of this using my favorite mc blocks. Located on vetcanyon2
http://imgur.com/a/WmCBJ

Build 8:This next one is a miniaturized build of build 3 just a little different. Located on vetcanyon2
http://imgur.com/a/mGng7

Build 9:This next one is a build I am currently building so this is what I have so far. Located on u_David00143
http://imgur.com/a/fkS3n

Thanks guys hope to keep this updated with my progress.

Re: Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: August 5th, 2013, 7:20 pm
by Jjb14
Well you most certainly are a good builder!

A few things-

:green: Your builds are very pretty, and numerous.
:green: Most of your builds have great detail!
:red: Personally, I've never been a huge fan of "Create block layer" "move up and in one block and repeat" Kind of builds, though they are pretty, they are relatively easy to make IMHO.
:red: While you have many good builds, there is a lack of a large build that makes one say, "OH WOW!" If it is possible to maybe make something that retains detail, is just as pretty as some of your better builds, and is also larger, I would thrust a giant
Image
in your face.

Keep at it! :cow:

Re: Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: August 5th, 2013, 7:53 pm
by FierceReacter
Okay, noted jjb. Thanks

Re: Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: August 6th, 2013, 5:13 pm
by Sanjar Khan
Copy paste less then we'll talk.

Re: Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: August 6th, 2013, 7:30 pm
by FierceReacter
Heres the finished piece of Build 9. I didn't know what to make on top. So I made it into a arena kind of thing.
http://imgur.com/685WmDm

Re: Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: August 9th, 2013, 4:48 am
by Skinnygamer
Looks like a terrific start Fierce! I really like the color choice on each different build. Nothing is too overpowering. Just a couple suggestions here: try to not copy paste 1 wall on the entire thing. Maybe throw some cool looking floor designs in on the inside to make there be an actual interior on some of the builds. Lastly, experiment with some roof ideas such as pillars, spires, and arches. Anyways, good luck to you. This is a great start! :D ~Skinny

Re: Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: August 9th, 2013, 1:56 pm
by Arkaunis
Step outside the box more. Dont make the builds look so consistent throughout. As mentioned, the layers are far too similar, in not just one build, but them all. The roof designs are nice, but there's not really that "wow" factor for me.

Try a little bit more detail in the surrounding area and go with some abstract concepts instead of some continuously concrete builds.

Re: Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 12:55 pm
by Knom16
These builds are like 90% created of using /copy and /paste . There is no really detail on them.
Your past on our server doesn't make it easier anyway. I really want to see more effort.

Re: Mason Application ~ FierceReacter

Posted: October 4th, 2014, 3:23 am
by Pemalite
No need to revive old threads.