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THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 3rd, 2011, 2:39 pm
by name1111111111
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Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 3rd, 2011, 5:04 pm
by Sanjar Khan
The story of my degrading eyesight.
Once, not so very long ago, some dude decided to sign up on this forum with the intention of sharing a little tale he came up with.
Being pure hearted and interested in the affairs of our members I took to reading his topic.
It wasn't long untill the lack of subdividing alinea's, proper grammar, horrid spelling along with syntaxes that made no sense at all started to take their toll on my retinae.

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 3rd, 2011, 5:28 pm
by DreamingInsane
Here's mine:
Once Upon a time, I Didn't give a shit. Still don't. The End.


In seriousness:
Wut?

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 3rd, 2011, 6:28 pm
by Sanjar Khan
DreamingInsane wrote: In seriousness:
Wut?
Apparantly the dude made a build, and thought it was so good he just had to butcher the english language out of reverence for his creation.

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 3rd, 2011, 7:20 pm
by DreamingInsane
Sanjar Khan wrote:
DreamingInsane wrote: In seriousness:
Wut?
Apparantly the dude made a build, and thought it was so good he just had to butcher the english language out of reverence for his creation.
Ah, so he google'd synonyms minecraft story made by a fanatic.

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 3rd, 2011, 10:01 pm
by Lim-Dul
1. Punctuation
2. Capitalization
3. Text division (paragraphs)

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 4th, 2011, 12:28 am
by kattoo

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 4th, 2011, 1:17 am
by Fehzor
Name, you need to meet up with Ninjawolf. You 2 would make quite the couple.

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 4th, 2011, 3:34 am
by Gabe86
name111111(lotta 1's), i thought your grammar was excellent. So what if I couldnt read half the story, and there was no picture to go along with it, (I only read picture books). I could still feel it... in here *points to right side of my chest, because I don't know where my heart actually is*

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 4th, 2011, 6:52 am
by Ollieboy
Not a retard wrote:Once upon a time, a long time ago, the world was corrupt by evil. The lands were burning and the world in despair. God had to do something to change the world and to make all well again. He sent down a man by the name of Jacob to save the land, but the devil wouldn't let him take his evil work away.
The devil sent minions, fire guards and even fire zealots but nothing he threw at Jacob could stop him as his soul was too pure for any evil to corrupt him. Soon Jacob came face to face with the devil and they both fought until finally the devil slashed at Jacob with his staff. This caused Jacob too fall down as he saw his life fade away. However, God did not want this to happen, so he sent an angel to come to and revive Jacob. The angel also gave him a gift from God; a holy sword. With it he slashed the devil with ease and slayed him.
The world was pure again, but in a nearby town there were devil worshipers. They disguised themselves as normal people, but the whole town was corrupt. Under the town there was a dark, dark secret. The worshipers had rebuilt hell and started to summon the devil back to life! A spy who lived in that town told prayed to God and told him the bad news.
Upon this, God himself came down his stairs of life and pure good, and he confronted these evil beings, imprisoning them in hell.
They still remain there to this day in the new hell underneath their abandoned town, and remaining in place are two stairways. The first leads to the skies, which only the good and pure of heart can ascend to live with God, and the second leads down to hell, where God banished the heretics to a life of torture.
I kinda fixed it, but I still see no relation whatsoever to Minecraft or just even...life in general.

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 4th, 2011, 11:50 pm
by Lim-Dul
name1111111111 wrote:.....
He fixed it himself! MUCH better!

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 12:07 am
by kattoo
Let's start our story. I'll begin the spamfest, you guys just add a word, copying the previous sentence (with articles or prepositions) :P

Her

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 12:30 am
by Xesdra
kattoo wrote:Let's start our story. I'll begin the spamfest, you guys just add a word, copying the previous sentence (with articles or prepositions) :P
You're on!

Her face

(In relation to OP: It's a nice story! (At least the one I read from Ollie's post))

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 12:45 am
by DreamingInsane
Xesdra wrote:Her face
Her Face Was

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 12:50 am
by Aleries
DreamingInsane wrote:
Xesdra wrote:Her face
Her Face Was
Her face was potato

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 1:06 am
by Ollieboy
Her face was potato, and

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 1:50 am
by xKoreaNx
Ollieboy wrote:Her face was potato, and
Her face was potato, and potato

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 1:52 am
by DreamingInsane
xKoreaNx wrote:Her face was potato, and potato
Her face was potato, and potato, so

(You're a troll Korean, You almost ruined it.)

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 1:54 am
by Ollieboy
Her face was potato, and potato, so when

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 2:40 am
by Helio_
Her face was potato, and potato, so when she

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 3:38 am
by Sanjar Khan
Her face was potato, and potato, so when my she rotated

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 3:50 am
by Ollieboy
You can't just CHANGE the word if you don't like it :P

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 9:51 am
by Sanjar Khan
I seem to have completely disregarded Helio's post

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 10:19 am
by Ollieboy
Her face was potato, and potato, so when she rotated gleefully,

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 10:32 am
by kattoo
Her face was potato, and potato, so when she rotated gleefully, the potato

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 11:25 am
by Ollieboy
Her face was potato, and potato, so when she rotated gleefully, the potato became

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 11:34 am
by Sanjar Khan
Her face was potato, and potato, so when she rotated gleefully, the potato became quite

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 1:37 pm
by Aleries
Her face was potato, and potato, so when she rotated gleefully, the potato became quite embellished.

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 1:47 pm
by Sanjar Khan
Kattoo added two words :angryskeleton:

Re: THE stroyline of my building

Posted: July 5th, 2011, 2:03 pm
by kattoo
And you broke the chain, besides if you read my post - I said you should add proper prepositions and articles, hence the two words >.<


Her face was potato, and potato, so when she rotated gleefully, the potato became quite embellished. Encouraged
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